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I thought I was past this,
That I was done feeling this way.
But why is it you that I still miss
And think about some days.
It appears you have moved on,
And I thought I did too.
I'm trying to be strong
And figure out what to do.
But I can't stop thinking about it,
Can't help but remember all the fun we had.
A possibility inside my mind has been lit,
And this idea has been driving me mad.
Could there still be a chance for us?
Could we start it up again?
I don't want to leave what we had in the dust,
So what does this mean for us then?
Maybe I should just come right out
And say what has been on my thoughts.
What happened has made me doubt
What I originally thought were my wants.
I miss you.
I miss us.
With these thoughts, I'm not sure what to do.
And I don't know who else to trust.
I can't just go up to my friends and say this,
What would they think about my choices now?
But I can't help what I feel and miss.
I'm still trying to figure out how!
I mean, how can this happen?
How can this just come out of no where
And make my peaceful thoughts flatten.
I'm lost and to tell someone, I do not dare.
I can't help but wonder if you are happier now,
Or if you too miss what we once were.
To these feelings I cannot bow,
I mean…. what if they are only a lure?
Something to steer me off from where I am?
Still…what if they are as real as they feel…
And should I do all that I can
To maybe make them real?
This is all so confusing,
And I don't know what you would even say.
I feel as though I am losing
This battle with myself every single day.
I wish someone would understand,
I can't handle this mess alone.
I need a helping hand,
But I'm afraid of what might be shown.
I miss you a lot…
And I don't know what to think….
Every time I see you, my breathing stops
And my thoughts push me to the brink.
I'm ready to explode,
I can't contain it anymore.
So get ready to examine this load
because I don't want to be alone anymore.
Well... It's safe to say I'm utterly and completely confused and torn..... back to poetry, it'll always be my safety net <3
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the  on your keybord is broken, get on fixing tht or else you wont be ble to spell words like sshole
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Always forget this part... lol, got the photo from [link] (So, no it's not mine. haha)
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TheBroodMother Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
I miss you too...
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2877075 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
oh, i agree with your descreption. always safe in poetry. the picture hit me as well, love it <3
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I put quite a bit of thought into the photo. again, thanks
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ReflectedElements Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Very moving and I am sure alot of people on here can relate to it. Your poetry is exceptional, you should consider publishing it all.
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You think? I've considered it, but haven't really been sure ha. Thank you btw.
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whitekawaiitiger Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg this poem is so good :) there are some people that go though what this poem expresses and if they could read this, i think they would feel the same way and would feel as if they aren't alone. and i'm saying this 'cause i'm kinda one of them hehe '^-^ great job on this :D
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank You. Haha, I do wish there was a way more people could see it cuz know more people do feel this way. Once again, thanks :)
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whitekawaiitiger Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're very welcome and right, i would love for people to be able to read this. it is so heartfelt :) it almost made me cry 'cause it was so good and so true. and you're welcome ^-^


(srry for the late reply '^-^ hehe)
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Marmaladde Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This poem is so beautiful. It really hits close to my heart. :hug:
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. that really means a lot. haha
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Marmaladde Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! :)
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LordByrand Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love Coldplay.... never heard this one before.... but I have now. thank you.
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LordByrand Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are quite welcome.
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yuffieHeart Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
i feel ya dude. *hugs* poetry is a life saver.
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Poetry is indeed a life savior. Not sure where I'd be without it
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hnfavery Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Go on man... make the move!
you dont have anything to lose... you´re already lost!
Real friends... if they´re really your friends... tell them, they´ll always help and support your "madness"! :)
Give her time... and space... if you are good talking as you´re good with poetry you´ll be fine!!
lol...lucky man!! ;)

great work!!
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TaeYoongJoongSa Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Sometimes I also think about the past ... I'm not sure if I'll ever see some (or any) of them ever again ... but I guess that's life sometimes

Time passes ... people come ... people go ... you look back ... and you're still thinking of them ... sometimes
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IThinkYoureBleeding Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I almost cried reading this. :( I thought I was the only one who felt like that..
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LeopardRose Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
i know the feeling. me too but im not that good at writing poetry
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TotalAnimeNerd38 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Omg.
This is like....
My life story.
*hugs you*
I feel you, bro.
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Jepuisadore17 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Please tell the person whom this is about.
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ironically, the person this is about is on DA...
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Jepuisadore17 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Go tell them! Or send it to them, or Something. They might really need to hear this.
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PandaBunnyCub Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
I can say that your poem has a lot of meaning and I definitely know where you are coming from and how you feel. When your heart finally wants to let go then it will and then you could focus on something else or someone else. I know that this feeling of loneliness and sorrow will disappear but just give it time and everything will get better. Also this is an amazing poem and it really can connect to so many people who have been through what you're going through. I hope you feel better
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, It's good to know other people get it too.
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PandaBunnyCub Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
You're welcome and no worries, you're not alone
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this song.. one of my fav. of all time
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99colourful Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Exactly how I feel now
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bmfbmf Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
Good Job. I Miss you too. ^_^
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InfiniteForever Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this same thing literally just happened to me, and still kind of happening. this poem is so close to what had happened to me that i might think that you had some how watched everything as it went down.

this is some fine piece of writing and thats why im going to plop you a watch to see more good pieces. keep it up. :D
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank You so much! :) I hope your situation is getting better
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InfiniteForever Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your very welcome! and the same to you.
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